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kalleanker
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Tjek lige mit engelsk

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Roblon A / S is a company which has its start back in 1954. Erik Schou had just returned from Copenhagen to take over his father's six fishing boats. But one day his eye catch ad, which was announced on nylon cord from the old English parachute. He asked for a sample, however the cord was 3 meters long because of that they wasn’t useful. Then he got the idea to use the old nylon cord to produce trawlposer.
The public began to find Eric Schou product and quality very useful and the news spread through mouth to mouth, and especially the quality was the fishermen impressed about. They were accustomed to a product which often went broke during use. Now there was this product with enormously durable and able to cope with the hard structures on the sea. Along with the increasing demand Eric Schou could see that it was the right customer basis to start his own business.

Roblon has today 150 employs working, in their three divisoner: Engineering, Industrial Fiber and Fiber Optics.

2. Situations analysis
Head of state in China Hu Jintao, and has stayed in power, where he will sit to 2012. Since both Denmark and China is a member of the WTO, it means that all deals between countries are against international laws and regulations. This means that when Danish exporters to sell goods to China, he will rarely meet requirements as he is not accustomed to from their own country.

3. Analysis of demand
For Roblon it is very important to maintain a good image of their product. It is therefore important for Roblon, to ensure that they can provide the best possible publicity when they enter the Chinese market. This can be done in several ways, but Roblon ways to do this is to continue to produce products which are at a very high quality, so they will not be forgotten, and the buyers’ wants to make a repurchase.

One of the reasons that the company might have chosen this particular form of exports could be for example that the Chinese sales agent knows the market; they know what areas of china and who need this specific product.
Benefits of using indirect distribution and thus an intermediary are:
• Influence on marketing.
• Accelerating the spread of the product.
• Sells in their own brand.
• Knowledge of the public.

Apart from the above arguments, it can be seen that this form of distribution can be an economic advantage for Roblon; because of this form of distribution it only requires a small investment. It will be the sales agent which will have to create the contact and therefore they don’t need to build an export department. The agent has also a lot of knowledge about the Chinese market, which would then minimize the impending mismanagement.
It is certainly an advantage to sell in its own name as it is not only going to be a no-name product for the Chinese.

4. Analysis of competition
Price competition in China in industrial fiber cable seems to keep its prices at a level which approximates the market.
It seems that most Chinese companies have a preference to foreign products.

5. Assessment
Roblon afford to market their product in the Chinese market through a profit of 24.6 million Danish kroner 06/07 years. And they will also allocate more money to promote themselves.

6. Target
The economic targets Roblon has on their exports to China could read as follows:
• Increase the income by 20% in China
The marketing objectives could read as follows:
• To be a well-known supplier in the industry fiber cables

7. Segmentation and choice of target
S: The target audience has been growing in recent years, and will remain so, with a 15% increase in the market.
M: The opportunities to reach the target audience is good, but it requires enough even greater degree of promotion than what we have seen previously from Roblon.
D: The cost comes to processing such a large market as the Chinese would be great. This is due to ads in business magazines, fair and agents are required to communicate the existence of the product to other companies.
C: Competition situation is tough, because there are many providers of this particular product as Roblon also produce. Many of Roblons competitors in this market they just want to get a quick profit and their products are not of equally high quality as Roblon.

9. Differentiation
Focus differentiation
This will fit Roblon best, it will be for several reasons. For an example, they will have to focus on the unique products, the products will be appreciated and interested customers know that they are a serious business. Another important point is that they do not yet have the large market share in the Chinese market.

10. Positioning
Since Roblon have a USP-Unique Selling Proportion, it is that they offer customers the ability to special design the product they are facing and shortcomings. The only requirement is that it simply must be a further development in one of their previous products.

12. Conclusion
There are clearly opportunities in the Chinese marked to sell their products. This is due to the Chinese economy rattling ahead, and that Chinese companies increasingly need foreign quality products.


Skriv lige hvad der skal rettes.. Tak for hjælpen gutter og Sunshine :D
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Det er meget svært at rette en engelsk tekst når vi ikke ved hvad du har skrevet den ud fra. Jeg har kun lige skimtet den, men der er da nogle grammatiske fejl, samt sætninger der sagtens kunne omformuleres for at få et mere flydende sprog. Desuden, hvilken komma regel bruger du?
For der kan jo ikke bare sættes som du normalt ville gøre på dansk.
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sætter bare komma.. De er fjernet nu, bare kom med alle de grammatiske fejl
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Beklager har desværre ikke lige tid til at sidde og rette det. Har selv lidt eksamen at tænke på :)
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Kiggede meget kortvarrigt på det, hvis det er et seriøst forslag til aflevering, hvilket niveau snakker vi så om? Bare 3. sætning;

... But one day his eye catched an ad...

Har du oversat lige over fra dansk, for det er umådeligt ikke særligt engelsk klingende :S

Har hverken tid eller overskud til at rette den igennem, samt jeg ikke tror, at jeg ville være specielt egnet.

Men held og lykke.
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Jeg kan ikke se hvad der er galt med an, FrZ.
Men catched skal være caught.
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kalleanker skrev:Bla bla bla... But one day his eye catch ad, bla bla bla...
Det er der galt :)
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Har du brugt google translate? nogen af de sætninger er virkelig sat dårligt sammen.

and especially the quality was the fishermen impressed about. They were accustomed to a product which often went broke during use.

Der nåede jeg til, synes du skal tage og kigge på de 2 sætninger igen.
Er det fordi jeg er mørk, du ikke kan lide mig?
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hvad betyder trawlposer på engelsk? 3. linje...

Der er mange grundlæggende mangler, men det meste er forståeligt, dog håber jeg ikke at det er til brug over B/C Niveau på Gym/HTX/HHx...
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Der er slet ikke noget der hedder trawlposer på engelsk!
Jeg vil da endda gå så langt at sige at jeg ikke håber det er højere end 8 klasses niveau. Det er en online translater der har lavet det der, det må det næsten være.
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Jeg har lige læst det hurtigt igennem.
Man kan forstå det - men der er rigtig mange fejl. Håber heller ikke det er noget der skal afleveres på et "højere" niveau.

Det ligner utrolig meget noget der er oversat af et program.

Til sidst skriver du: Skriv lige hvad der skal rettes.

Det har jeg ikke tid til. Iøvrigt er det din opgave og derfor dig der skal lave den.

Altså - hvis det er noget der skal afleveres i en opgave, så vil jeg mene du skal skrive det hele om.
(omformuler og kontrollere grammatik).

Klø på - og lad os se hvad du kommer frem til. 8)

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goafreak skrev:Jeg kan ikke se hvad der er galt med an, FrZ.
Men catched skal være caught.
Irregulære verber... Som sagt ikke specielt egnet :) - kunne bare se, at verbet skulle i datid og at der manglede et "an" :)
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Jeg troede det du havde skrevet, var det han havde skrevet.
Altså et quote hvor du havde highlightet fejlene.
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Den her sprang i øjnene på mig :P

"Roblon has today 150 employs working, in their three divisoner:"

Ordstilling, employs, divisioner.

Den er en ommer :)
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